2013-05-24T21:28:12-07:00 http://freakangels.com/whitechapel/ Lussumo Vanilla & Feed Publisher http://freakangels.com/whitechapel/comments.php?DiscussionID=10007&Focus=300677#Comment_300677 2011-07-06T01:28:52-07:00 2013-05-24T21:28:12-07:00 The_Doc http://freakangels.com/whitechapel/account.php?u=3552

Here's a 5-page sample I put together that Image was having none of. I personally think it was amazing work by all parties involved and still intend to get the series off the ground one day. So ...

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Writer: Myself Artist: Olan Orig (If, y'know, anyone here wants to give this incredibly fucking talented man steady work I wouldn't complain. Tell him Darron sent ya. Err... that is if he doesn't ...

Writer: Myself
Artist: Olan Orig (If, y'know, anyone here wants to give this incredibly fucking talented man steady work I wouldn't complain. Tell him Darron sent ya. Err... that is if he doesn't start cursing you out for mentioning the bastid who got him to put so much work into a dog that wouldn't hunt.)
Inker: Bradd Mielke (Ditto)
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Pretty pictures. Did you try any other publishers? My one suggestion -- not that you've asked -- is to rethink the captions beginning midway down page three. You're breaking one of the biggest ...

My one suggestion -- not that you've asked -- is to rethink the captions beginning midway down page three. You're breaking one of the biggest rules of comics storytelling (if comics storytelling can be said to have rules): You're narrating to the reader exactly what the reader can already see on the page. When you can help it, words and pictures should be complimentary rather than redundant.]]> http://freakangels.com/whitechapel/comments.php?DiscussionID=10007&Focus=301136#Comment_301136 2011-07-08T19:11:20-07:00 2013-05-24T21:28:12-07:00 The_Doc http://freakangels.com/whitechapel/account.php?u=3552

No, no. I welcome any criticism I can get. It only helps me get better. Yeah, the more I look at that 3rd page I see more and more i'd like to change. I have a bad habit of overexplaining bits; i've ...