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      CommentAuthorSai
    • CommentTimeAug 19th 2009
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    Ep 18 Page 2 - The shadow from KK's bike is a reflection, rather than a shadow as it was on the previous page


    How so? What is it reflecting off? The floor is wood..
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    I think he means it's a distorted and flipped silhouette of the bike rather than an accurate representation of what the shadow would really look like under those circumstances.
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    @ Sarracenia

    Cool, thanks for the tree-based input :) Unfortunately there's not much I can do now that location has been so firmly established, but I'll bear the info in mind for future agricultural scenes.

    @Purple Wyrm & Klumaster

    You're both right about those (and blimey that must have taken a bit of thinking and mapping to figure out which direction the watchtower is facing. This is the problem with working with a real place XD)

    I appreciate the help from everyone, but take a few minutes to figure out whether you're commenting on sections that have already gone to publication.
    Unless I put a note up here saying I need edits for a reprint of volume 1 or 2, then stick to pages that will be in Volume 3, so we can get some practical use from the thread :)
    (that's eps 49+ there are 144 pages or 24 eps to a volume).
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      CommentAuthorPurple Wyrm
    • CommentTimeAug 20th 2009 edited
     (3181.24)
    Right ho! Volume 3 it is (I shall thus refrain from mentioning Luke's mysterious one frame shirt... oh damn ;)
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    In episode 66 page 4 panel 2 the word "to" seems to be missing from the first word balloon.
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    @Derekshepard
    Either you miss-read, or that's been corrected super-sharpish by Ariana :)
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      CommentAuthordddrum
    • CommentTimeSep 13th 2009
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    [Ep. 0068] ...(B)ottom of page two... A matched pair of panels, nearly identical, but for the diabolical glow of Luke's FA juju, carefully nudging the safety off of Kirk's firearm. ...(A)nother interesting difference: the camo pattern on Kirk's pants. Hmm. Seems a bit odd. I would think (the) artist would just clone the panel, and then change the significant details. The rain, for exam-- holy chikkin nuggitz, the rain. Every drop, streak, splash and ripple is the same. The panel was cloned! Which begs the question: why are Kirk's shorts apparently squirming like Rorschach's mask on Red Bull?


    Hello, Paul. As per your request, I transplanted that observation from the general discussion of Episode 68. I don't feel it is a big deal, actually -- just a minor distraction. The only reason I brought it up was that the camo pattern changed while the raindrops remained the same, leading me to wonder whether it figured into the story, like maybe Kirk had just been shunted, in a nano-instant, to an alternate universe -- a very existential plot point to be sure, but hey -- c'est la steampunk, nesty pass? ;-)

    As always, I stand in utter awe of your artistry. Just remember: in hyperspace, no one can see your pants.
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    in hyperspace, no one can see your pants.
    ... Thanks for making me spit mt.dew dddrum.
    Hahaha.
    • CommentAuthorFlabyo
    • CommentTimeSep 13th 2009
     (3181.29)
    in hyperspace, no one can see your pants


    And just like that Arkady's earlier lack of undercrackers is explained...
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    I'm guessing the raindrops are a different layer in the drawing program, and only that layer was cloned. But I'll await Paul's more scientific explanation.
    In Hyperspace, your pants exist in all points of the universe simultaneously, no? Now I suddenly I have an idea called "The Sisterhood of the Time- Traveling Pants." Or, "Have Pants, Will Travel." Ack, this hurts my head.
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      CommentAuthorruzkin
    • CommentTimeSep 13th 2009
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    I hadn't noticed the squirming pants before. Now it's all I can see.
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    @ Paul

    I was just re-reading the series and I noticed that in Ep 61 and 62, Jack's tatoo seems to have vanished comepletely. It meandered in and out in the earlier volumes, but has gone AWOL completely now.

    ETA: Ep 64 pg 3
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      CommentAuthorBerserker
    • CommentTimeSep 18th 2009
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    Episode 69, panels two of both page one and page three - Luke's bullet holes disappear from his pants.
    • CommentAuthorelae
    • CommentTimeSep 19th 2009
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    I'm not sure if this has been mentioned, or if I'm just seeing it wrong--
    but the first page, first panel of episode 60, the girl has two right hands. Both hands appear to have the thumb on the same side.
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    @elae

    Thanks! Hadn't spotted that one. Not quite two right hands, but a colouring mistake that makes it look like one of her fingers is her thumb on one hand. Will be fixed :)
    • CommentAuthorFan
    • CommentTimeOct 30th 2009
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    Episode 74, page 3, panel 1: Connor is missing his fishnet right sleeve.
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    @Fan :) Thanks! Noted and will be fixed for trade.
    • CommentAuthorZJVavrek
    • CommentTimeNov 13th 2009
     (3181.38)
    Credit goes to robinimmortal here:
    And uhh why is Sirkka wearing what is either dark shorts or a skirt in Ep 75. But in Ep 74 she was wearing 3/4 length skintone leggings? :P

    Leggings vs. skirt. Original post here: link.

    I have to say, I actually like the skirt look more.
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    @ZJVavrek
    Ah, nicely spotted! I prefer the skirt too :)
    Paul.
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      CommentAuthordiello
    • CommentTimeNov 16th 2009
     (3181.40)
    Another vote for the skirt here!
    Although, I do like the cute leggings :)

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