When Mask gets cornered and throws the cutesy kitty-kat eyes. I just about bust a gut in the school lab. It's so over the top and zany and cliche, but it's friggin' hilarious at the same time. Bravo!
Diggin the art. Generally, it seems a little cliche, but that's always a good place to start. If I might add a suggestion to the compostion, color outside the lines a little more. Makes it a little more immersive.
Thanks, Evan! do you mean add color outside the figures? Not sure I understand. but yeah, trying to get the cliches out of my system with this story so I can clear space for new ones. Basically, I need to flush out all the weird before I start making more mature stuff....
hello. everyone. just wanted to bring you up to speed real quick: I updated the opening post. And now that I've got a few pages stockpiled I will be posting my comic on myspace in scrolling chunks. Hope you can make it! ;) -Chris