I do, thank you! ^_^ I think I have a way to go with my dialogue, but I'm learning all the time. Hell, I'm always learning with the art side as well, haha. For a while I had my husband join me on scripting the old version - so a lot of it was a collaborative effort, as I feel he has a more natural flair for dialogue than me...I love writing, but I find naturalistic dialogue tricky. He still helps out with proofing and some of the lines you'll see in this reborn section are still from his old scripts, but mostly this is me now. ^_^
I wrote and drew Violet back for the DFC, and found the dialogue easier in that...with Dragon Heir, I used to feel too much like I should lean towards 'epic speak', haha...when actually, it's not needed and makes the whole thing a little too pompous. So I think it can depend on the story you're tackling. Good luck with it! ^_^
Yeah, i dont know how well "the epic speak" really works. I mean i love that stuff and it's probably how i would have done something like dragon heir, but its just like you said it's so easy to make it all sound pompous, i can imagine it must be fun working more grounded dialogue into a fantasy setting.