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    • CommentAuthorpiablo
    • CommentTimeOct 25th 2009
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    tell me your thoughts?
    • CommentAuthorpiablo
    • CommentTimeOct 25th 2009
     (7076.2)
    http://twiturm.com/impbi
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      CommentAuthorPaladine
    • CommentTimeOct 26th 2009
     (7076.3)
    Totally not my kind of music, or I'd comment, but whatever I could say would be because of the general style, not specifics of the song.
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    Not bad.
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      CommentAuthorPaul Sizer
    • CommentTimeOct 26th 2009
     (7076.5)
    Sounds pretty decent. Kind of a Prodigy-like bassline and drums feel, a little industrial Front 242 edge to it. Feels like it's waiting for vocals/samples to give it some structure; at this point, it's just soundtrack, a riff for a chase scene in a video game.
    • CommentAuthorshamaniam
    • CommentTimeOct 26th 2009
     (7076.6)
    I thought it has a very retro feel to it, I agree with what the the guy above me says, a couple of well chosen samples would do wonders to it. I also listened to the Wheel, I liked that a bit more, I just felt that the outro dragged a little, if you shortened that a little it might be a little better.
  2.  (7076.7)
    Nice :)
    Feel like it needs more resonance in the bass and a bit more underlying texture. You've obviously gone out of your way to make the beats sound organic, but perhaps some more random/structured variance in the volume of each sample making up a loop (and if you can be bothered, taking out any true looping entirely) would take that even further. The structure of the song comes mainly from swapping in and out marginally different arrangements of samples, but I have to say it all seemed a little arbitrary, there wasn't much of a feeling of shifting mood, or overall atmosphere. The song would take on a new level if it could become more than a slide-show of nice loops.
    I disagree that it's lacking vocal samples (which can often feel like arbitrary or compulsory additions with no intrinsic merit, depending on how they're handled), it's just lacking super-structure and underlying complexity.
    • CommentAuthorpiablo
    • CommentTimeOct 26th 2009 edited
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    • CommentAuthorpiablo
    • CommentTimeOct 26th 2009
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    http://twiturm.com/sahnc
    • CommentAuthorpiablo
    • CommentTimeOct 26th 2009
     (7076.10)
    http://twiturm.com/ghgzs
  3.  (7076.11)
    I could write to it.