Thanks, but it might just be the resolution, thrice as large as volume 1 of the comic, which was terribly restrictive and a frankly stupid stylistic choice of my part. "Yes, I'll make a comic where there's barely enough space for five words in each panel."
My main concern about the art in PITCH BLACK is that it helps the joke, and my main concern overall is that the jokes don't suck. Hopefully they don't, and if they do, feedback is always appreciated.